Friday, 17 June 2016


A long ago their was a taniwha that would come out at night when everyone is sleeping it is very scary. Once there was a boy named Tamarereti he was a little bit tall and then he went to go and get his waka and went fishing he Collected lots of fishes.

but then suddenly the wind went away and then Tamarereti felt tired and then he fell asleep in his waka then the waka stopped at a Island but then he wondered where he was.

then he went and made fire and then putted the fish on top of the fire and then cooked it then he ate it then he saw something on the side it was lights.

then he went back home safely because of the light that was shining at Tamarereti. and then the ranginui came and said thank you Tamarereti for the lights.

he was gonna get punished by the maori god but he was safe cause the Ranginui  didn’t punished him and He saved the land and now my sky is very beautiful.


Friday, 3 June 2016

London eye.

In London there is a ferris wheel it is a ride that goes slowly up then when it goes down the people start to fall down fast because when it goes down it goes very fast it is 120 metres tall and you can see work buildings where the workers trying to fix buildings and then you can see some houses down there it is not good to stand up cause it is dangerous to stand up because if you stand up and the ferris wheel goes down fast you might hurt some stuff in your body  it is so scary you can see outstanding views in the ferris wheel it is a comfortable ride it  is spacious and the ferris wheel is made out of glass and you might fall out the window and break your neck and your arm and also your leg will break and it is not good for little kids because they can fall out of the ferris wheel and break some of their bones and some of them might pass away and some might go to the hospital and their mum will cry because the got broken bones in their body and you might feel sad because their poor child is in the hospital lying in bed saying i love the ferris wheel .