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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 30 October 2020

Why Is School Important?

Hmm! Why is school important you say?


Intro 1: School is important because we get to learn all stuff we all haven’t learnt before and most of all we get more knowledge and stuff into our brain so that when we grow up it’s important for us to get a job with all the stuff we learnt from school. It is also important because we get to learn more words and complicated words that we can’t either sound out and it is more important for the younger kids to so they can know their numbers and their maths and other stuff that they learn at school!.

Intro 2: School is important because it gives us students to acquire knowledge on special various fields of education, such as literature, mathematics,politics,history and geography and other numerous subjects that we each get to learn as a student. If we don’t come to school and learn then we are uneducated and we do not have that much skills that function in our brains everyday when we wake up and think that’s why school is important for us!!.


Intro 3: Now this is more important!! When we end up going to school we can grow up to learn how to be the leaders of the school and be a role model in front of the younger students who are going to be the leaders after you finish school and come to visit you’ll see that they have followed your steps and have been a great good role model at the school.


Conclusion: Students that go to school you know might even have a great future and have lots of money and might even help homeless people until they get onto their feet!

TASK DESCRIPTION: Today we had to explain why school is important for us!

Saturday, 1 August 2020

Taniwha Description.


 


TASK DESCRIPTION: For this weeks task today we have been learning about Taniwha's for Literacy.

Monday, 15 June 2020

Cockle Create


TASK DESCRIPTION: Today we have been learning about cockles I have made an poster today to explain to other people what Cockles are.

Sunday, 14 June 2020

Ki-O-Rahi.

Today during literacy we went and played Ki-O-Rahi with Room 5 with Tyson and Mrs Vaafusuaga. When we arrived at the court we each got a belt that we had to wrap around our waist and a tag to stick on our belt, we then got seperated so half of room 5 came to us and half of room 1 went over to the other half of room 5. I was in the yellow team and in our first match we versed the purple team they were kinda mixed up with pink tags too, but in our first match we lost against them but we did do pretty good throughout the game with them and it was a good game. Our second match we versed the reddish pinkish team and I say it was also a pretty good game but again we lost in the second match but itless we tried our best on getting scores and trying to win.


Thanks to Mrs Vaafusuaga and Tyson for setting up the game for us Team 5 students.


Restate
Write here: It was fun. I enjoyed it, we were cold at first but as we started running and playing we started to get warmer. Each of our groups did good by trying to score and win lots of points as we played, I say my group tried their best to try to win the matches but at the end of the day it was just a game we played. 

Wednesday, 10 June 2020

Playing Ki-O-Rahi.



TASK DESCRIPTION: Today we have been reading and learning about how to play Ki-O-Rahi and in the second slide we've had to figure out all the sections in Ki-O-Rahi

Sunday, 31 May 2020

Mr Burt''s Appreciation Post.

Today Friday the 12th of June we had a special assembly for our principle to celebrate for him since he got a New Zealand Order Of Merit from Queen Elizabeth. We enter assembly and sitted down for a little while and then it was time for us to congratulate him for receiving an award from the Queen, We sang in Samoan and then we sang in english we then sang Ko Te Whaea after we had singed two songs for Mr Burt and then the boys in front of us did an Haka to congratulate him with it.

I would like to Thank Mr Burt for always being there for us and telling us what was the right thing to do and what was the wrong thing to do, I would also like to thank him for his awesome effort for getting up every morning like and setting everything up for us like our teachers do. He has been a really great principle for the adults who came to our school way before we were even born and teached them back then.They are now all grown ups and have childrens and are sending them back to this school because this is the school they grew up and were teached by Mr Burt and other teachers that were here back then. 





Tuesday, 12 May 2020

The Seeing Hawk.



TASK DESCRIPTION: Today we've been reading about The Seeing Hawk this story is all about this boys koro being an extraordinary person who can see stuff that other people can not see. 

Tuesday, 5 May 2020

The Hawk Create Task.


TASK DESCRIPTION: This week we've been given an create task to talk about The Flying Hawk we have read about. Here's what I know about the The Flying Hawk Kite book that I was reading.

Wednesday, 29 April 2020

Writing About My Day.

Today I woke up really early and went shower brushed my teeth and hair and finally had breakfast before going to get ready for my online class. We first had our whole team 5 meet where we all gather together with all the teachers and just talked about school and notices after that we had literacy class that was my most favorite part of the day because we had my favorite teacher Mrs Whaea Kelly, and after literacy class we had math and we were all done for the day just had to finish off some school work we learning about just math work Geometry which is fun from home we learned new stuff and just doing all the chores at home. 

THE END!!!!!

Literacy Class Activity.

Sunday, 1 March 2020

Explanation Writing.

EXPLANATION WRITING


T Title - What you will be explaining?


I Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.


I Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence


C Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.


IDEAS -


Title What is your writing topic?

How do we celebrate important events in our cultures?

Introduction 
Have you ever thought that people might celebrate the same event as you do? Well some do they might celebrate important events as you do like on weddings and birthdays and other events.


Information
So on an important event in our culture, So my culture is Tongan and I am going to talk about how we celebrate events, So if it's a birthday or wedding or any other special events. So if it's a birthday we cook food overnight so that on the day the food is all ready and we have the cake prepared too.


Information
Secondly When the food and the cake is prepared for the birthday we then get the girl prepared and ready for the tau’olunga at the birthday then when the girl comes out and dances in the middle then everybody starts getting up and dancing and putting money on the girl who is dancing.



Information
If it’s an wedding we also do the same thing but prepare bigger stuff and that, We either have the weddings at somewhere big and we bring the food but some prepare the food for the Bride and the Groom and the family and friends who are coming to the wedding and then when it is done then the weddings begin.


Summary
Do yous have the same big events like us?
Have you ever done a dance for a birthday or weddings?
Does your family make events big like birthdays or weddings?

Monday, 24 February 2020

Choose it Narrative.






Once upon a time on a lovely Friday afternoon there was a little mermaid named clancy she was an ordinary mermaid on that friday afternoon she went swimming so that she could get all the stress out of her mind from the other mermaids, That when she was swimming peacefully out of nowhere she felt like she wanted to go somewhere mystery but her dad wouldn’t let her go out to the shore, she went without telling her parents because she thinks that her parents wouldn't know. So when she went out to the shore she didn’t know where she was heading but she kept on swimming even though she swam like for an hour, but she sure remembered something that her dad told her that there was a portal but he said it like this “when you are older make sure you always be careful and what you do and where you go because there’s a portal inside the middle east ocean that can lead you somewhere, but if you land into a island that looks like a square that means it’s a sign that you should not be there and that nobody has the clue to get out, and I


heard that other people got stuck there and had never came back she replied “why are you telling me this it is so scary I don’t want to hear it anymore” and the dad also replied “it is good for you so you know when your older” so now she’s is 18 years old. But she went and looked at the island, her face just dropped because of the island she saw…. IT WAS THE STORY THAT MY FATHER TOLD ME! She was shocked because she thought it was just a fake story. But she thought again about the story and how her dad said that the people that went there had never came back… she started panicking while she was in the sea, One Hour: after panicking she calm down for a second but she wondered if she could sit down in these was very surprised, because she can’t breathe on the shore so she said to herself “wait what?


How can I breathe on the shore? Do I have powers or something? No, I think I'm in a dream…. She slaps herself so hard that she almost falls into the ground.She thinks of many ways to find a way to get out of the middle east ocean. But she couldn’t so she swam all the way she just came but when she swam it always ended up going the way back to the island she was about so she went to the island and sat down and was about to cry but she just had to snap out of it. So now she is thinking how she felt that she did not follow her dad's rules, so she was so upset that she couldn’t get back to home but luckily her dad was following her the whole time because he knew she would swim out into the shore so he followed her to the island her dad found her crying on the island so he went and swam to there.


When he had finally got there he shouted her name and she looked around and could see that her dad was over there surprisingly looking a little bit upset and angry but he knew he shouldn’t be angry at her so he went on to the island and sat with her and hugged her he told her a story about when he was a little kid, he said when he was a little kid he and his friends were very adventurous they’d like to swim anywhere but not out to the shore one time one of his friends said “hmmm should we swim to shore and come back later lets go explore and have fun” But I said “I don’t really think that's a good idea to go out to the shore you know what could happen” but clancy’s dads friend didn’t care so clancy’s dad’s friend said “ Come on don’t be scared” and his other friends said yeah so his friends went and said “Peace we out” They swam away later on that day and Clancy’s dad stayed back but on that day they went none of his friends came back which was he obviously had a bad feeling that something really bad happened to them and something did and Clancy’s dad ended the story right there and said


“That’s why I’m telling you this story Clancy so that you know not to go out the shore again cause something really mad might happen to you and I never want that to happen to you” And clancy said “i’m sorry I didn’t listen to you dad I should’ve listen to your rules and never went out to the shore” They then gave each other big hugs and Clancy promised her dad she wouldn’t go out to the shore again, Clancy’s dad said “It’s getting a bit late we should hurry and get back home” So Clancy and her dad got off the island and went back home. And Clancy never went out to the shore again…

THE ENDDD

Thursday, 20 February 2020

Explanation Writing.


EXPLANATION WRITING 
T
Title - What you will be explaining?
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
Title What is your writing topic? How do we celebrate important events in our cultures? 
Introduction Have you ever thought that people might celebrate the same event as you do? Well some do they might celebrate important events as you do like on weddings and birthdays and other events. Information So on an important event in our culture, So my culture is Tongan and I am going to talk about how we celebrate events, So if it's a birthday or wedding or any other special events. So if it's a birthday we cook food overnight so that on the day the food is all ready and we have the cake prepared too. 

Information Secondly When the food and the cake is prepared for the birthday we then get the girl prepared and ready for the tau’olunga at the birthday then when the girl comes out and dances in the middle then everybody starts getting up and dancing and putting money on the girl who is dancing. 


Information If it’s an wedding we also do the same thing but prepare bigger stuff and that, We either have the weddings at somewhere big and we bring the food but some prepare the food for the Bride and the Groom and the family and friends who are coming to the wedding and then when it is done then the weddings begin. 


Summary Do yous have the same big events like us? Have you ever done a dance for a birthday or weddings? Does your family make events big like birthdays or weddings?

Thursday, 13 February 2020

My Six-Sentence Story

Six-sentence story
Sentence 1: Begins with ‘Once upon a time’ and introduces the main character
Sentence 2: Describes where the character lived

Sentence 3: Describes where the character’s special talent

Sentence 4: Describes the character’s problem

Sentence 5: Tells why the character felt that way

Sentence 6: Tells how the character solved the problem

1. Once upon a time, on a sunny hot morning I woke up and it was very hot, so I decided to go to the beach, I rang my friends, Victoria, Leah and Jayah and Leylani, I asked if they wanted to go to the beach, they replied “Sure“ so I waited for 7 minuties and they had arrived they walked around the beach talking, they settle down onto the sand and remain talking again. Later it was getting late but Jayah said ¨I´m hungry” then leah replied back to Jayah and said “ok l´ll grab a feed” and they said ¨ok¨ but all said together. So the main character is Jazzelle.She has hazel eyes with dark brown hair that’s long, she is 18 years old and has a loving soul with her family and friends.
2. She lives on a beautiful beach but in a 2 story brick house and when she goes outside she can see a lovely view from the outside on the balcony which is astonishing she lives in New Zealand she actually lives in tauranga, and her friends live not far from her when she's bored she can easily go onto the beach she lives near and go for a peaceful walk with the wind breezing through her hair and smelling fresh air and hearing the peaceful waves of the ocean or she either goes for a run on the beach.
3. She had a special talent but didn’t wanna show it too other people, She had a few special talents in her, Her first talent was drawing she was really good at drawing stuff and even her own friends, her second talent was playing netball really good that she got sportsmanship which her family & friends were really proud of her and she was also proud of herself, her third talent was brainstorming it was her last year in college before graduating and she was really good at brainstorming those were a few talents she had which was amazing her friends really loved her talents.

4. She lived in a big two story house and lived with her family but unfortunately both of her parents sometimes had full time jobs which often means that Jazzelle stayed home but sometimes if her parents had full time jobs her parents would ask Jazzelle’s friends parents if they had permission to go and have a sleepover at her house she loved staying with her friends which meant they got to stay up and have movie nights and do all sorts of girl stuff.

5. She wished to meet an interesting loving and loyal korean boy, She grew up watching K-Drama which is Korean-Drama she also loved listening and watching Kpop groups her favourite K-Pop group was BTS,IKON,TXT,TWICE,BLACKPINK,EXO and other kpop groups. She said she wanted to travel to korea and try out the new things in korea and also try their cultural food.

6. She then graduated college and worked very hard to save up and finally moved to korea with her friends she couldn’t go by herself so she invited her friends to go with her they moved into an hotel in korea and it was just beautiful so they unpacked their stuff and after they did that Jazzelle went out for a walk and while she was going for a walk she met this korean man who had a similar talent towards her talent he was handsome they then exchanged numbers and started talking about them and getting to know them, They started making their own art gallery company and Jazzelle and her boyfriend moved into an big two story house that it had 7 rooms which was enough for her and her boyfriend and her other friends to fit and just on one spare room. They started making money and lived happily ever after with her friends.