Sentence 1: Begins with ‘Once upon a time’ and introduces the main character
Sentence 2: Describes where the character lived
Sentence 3: Describes where the character’s special talent
Sentence 4: Describes the character’s problem
Sentence 5: Tells why the character felt that way
Sentence 6: Tells how the character solved the problem
1. Once upon a time, on a sunny hot morning I woke up and it was very hot, so I decided to go to the beach, I rang my friends, Victoria, Leah and Jayah and Leylani, I asked if they wanted to go to the beach, they replied “Sure“ so I waited for 7 minuties and they had arrived they walked around the beach talking, they settle down onto the sand and remain talking again. Later it was getting late but Jayah said ¨I´m hungry” then leah replied back to Jayah and said “ok l´ll grab a feed” and they said ¨ok¨ but all said together. So the main character is Jazzelle.She has hazel eyes with dark brown hair that’s long, she is 18 years old and has a loving soul with her family and friends.
Sentence 3: Describes where the character’s special talent
Sentence 4: Describes the character’s problem
Sentence 5: Tells why the character felt that way
Sentence 6: Tells how the character solved the problem
1. Once upon a time, on a sunny hot morning I woke up and it was very hot, so I decided to go to the beach, I rang my friends, Victoria, Leah and Jayah and Leylani, I asked if they wanted to go to the beach, they replied “Sure“ so I waited for 7 minuties and they had arrived they walked around the beach talking, they settle down onto the sand and remain talking again. Later it was getting late but Jayah said ¨I´m hungry” then leah replied back to Jayah and said “ok l´ll grab a feed” and they said ¨ok¨ but all said together. So the main character is Jazzelle.She has hazel eyes with dark brown hair that’s long, she is 18 years old and has a loving soul with her family and friends.
2. She lives on a beautiful beach but in a 2 story brick house and when she goes outside she can see a lovely view from the outside on the balcony which is astonishing she lives in New Zealand she actually lives in tauranga, and her friends live not far from her when she's bored she can easily go onto the beach she lives near and go for a peaceful walk with the wind breezing through her hair and smelling fresh air and hearing the peaceful waves of the ocean or she either goes for a run on the beach.
3. She had a special talent but didn’t wanna show it too other people, She had a few special talents in her, Her first talent was drawing she was really good at drawing stuff and even her own friends, her second talent was playing netball really good that she got sportsmanship which her family & friends were really proud of her and she was also proud of herself, her third talent was brainstorming it was her last year in college before graduating and she was really good at brainstorming those were a few talents she had which was amazing her friends really loved her talents.
4. She lived in a big two story house and lived with her family but unfortunately both of her parents sometimes had full time jobs which often means that Jazzelle stayed home but sometimes if her parents had full time jobs her parents would ask Jazzelle’s friends parents if they had permission to go and have a sleepover at her house she loved staying with her friends which meant they got to stay up and have movie nights and do all sorts of girl stuff.
5. She wished to meet an interesting loving and loyal korean boy, She grew up watching K-Drama which is Korean-Drama she also loved listening and watching Kpop groups her favourite K-Pop group was BTS,IKON,TXT,TWICE,BLACKPINK,EXO and other kpop groups. She said she wanted to travel to korea and try out the new things in korea and also try their cultural food.
6. She then graduated college and worked very hard to save up and finally moved to korea with her friends she couldn’t go by herself so she invited her friends to go with her they moved into an hotel in korea and it was just beautiful so they unpacked their stuff and after they did that Jazzelle went out for a walk and while she was going for a walk she met this korean man who had a similar talent towards her talent he was handsome they then exchanged numbers and started talking about them and getting to know them, They started making their own art gallery company and Jazzelle and her boyfriend moved into an big two story house that it had 7 rooms which was enough for her and her boyfriend and her other friends to fit and just on one spare room. They started making money and lived happily ever after with her friends.
4. She lived in a big two story house and lived with her family but unfortunately both of her parents sometimes had full time jobs which often means that Jazzelle stayed home but sometimes if her parents had full time jobs her parents would ask Jazzelle’s friends parents if they had permission to go and have a sleepover at her house she loved staying with her friends which meant they got to stay up and have movie nights and do all sorts of girl stuff.
5. She wished to meet an interesting loving and loyal korean boy, She grew up watching K-Drama which is Korean-Drama she also loved listening and watching Kpop groups her favourite K-Pop group was BTS,IKON,TXT,TWICE,BLACKPINK,EXO and other kpop groups. She said she wanted to travel to korea and try out the new things in korea and also try their cultural food.
6. She then graduated college and worked very hard to save up and finally moved to korea with her friends she couldn’t go by herself so she invited her friends to go with her they moved into an hotel in korea and it was just beautiful so they unpacked their stuff and after they did that Jazzelle went out for a walk and while she was going for a walk she met this korean man who had a similar talent towards her talent he was handsome they then exchanged numbers and started talking about them and getting to know them, They started making their own art gallery company and Jazzelle and her boyfriend moved into an big two story house that it had 7 rooms which was enough for her and her boyfriend and her other friends to fit and just on one spare room. They started making money and lived happily ever after with her friends.
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