TASK DESCRIPTION: For this weeks task we have described what each photos in this slide deck what's in there what it looks like and what you think of how you would describe this picture.
Hi Jazzelle, it is so good to see you working hard to complete your writing tasks while learning from home. Do you think that when you are describing a picture, you have to tell your readers you are describing it? Also, I would love to see you using more description of the beauty in the picture.
For example: Instead of telling your reader that there was a sunset...you could describe what it looks like:
The orange and grey light spread across the sky revealing a tiny sliver of yellow peering out just above the still water.
Hi Jazzelle, it is so good to see you working hard to complete your writing tasks while learning from home. Do you think that when you are describing a picture, you have to tell your readers you are describing it? Also, I would love to see you using more description of the beauty in the picture.
ReplyDeleteFor example: Instead of telling your reader that there was a sunset...you could describe what it looks like:
The orange and grey light spread across the sky revealing a tiny sliver of yellow peering out just above the still water.